giant squid

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all the other fish teased him for his slimy body and leafy like head

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THE REAL WAy

SQUIDS LEARN.

Under the blue sea there is a big dark patch of water and in that patch of water there is a colossal cave. The under sea fish named the cave King of the World Castle but it was also known as the KOTWC. When a giant squid came all the other fish teased him because of his slimy body and leafy like head plus his very big appetite.  

On no work day a big mean shark named Boots went to all the fish in the cave to get their homework.  then he went to the teacher called Mr Tyshell to ask for extra homework, when he got he gave it all to the giant squid whose name was Jack. before long Iaod the pufferfish saw him and called all the other fish. From then on they always called him things like  smarty pants and work jerk.  Jack tried to ignore them but every time they said it they said it meaner and more annoying thanks to a jellyfish named stinger. Plus whenever he got angry they called him the giant anger which made him more angry.

4 years later Jack realized that he could not ignore the insults so he thought he would stop  them from being mean. One day he decided to be nice to them  but he did not realise that it was them that was the problem not him as he was playing fin me also know as tag they called out to him here comes the slow poke which made him mad.  

In the end Jack discovered that he could not be like the others which turned out to be the problem  so he accepted that he would be teased his hole life but that made him into an amazing giant squid.